The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present bar chart and table compare data about the
number
of pupils who stayed in 4 different English-speaking countries namely, the USA, the UK, Use synonyms
Canada
, and Use synonyms
Australia
in 2004 and 2012.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of foreign Use synonyms
students
was rising; Use synonyms
thereafter
, Linking Words
America
was the Use synonyms
first
country in which Use synonyms
students
emigrated for study, and the Use synonyms
last
one was Linking Words
Canada
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
Australia
had a large percentage of foreign Use synonyms
students
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instead
of Linking Words
America
.
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According to
the Bar diagrams, the Linking Words
first
destination of migration Use synonyms
students
was Use synonyms
America
with 170,000 in 2004, Use synonyms
then
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this
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number
increased to roughly 250 in 2012. The second level was the United Kingdom and Use synonyms
Australia
which had absolutely the same amount in 2004 120,000; Use synonyms
then
, these figures had approximately 80,000 clim. The Linking Words
last
one was Linking Words
Canada
which had 40,000 Use synonyms
students
in 2004. Use synonyms
Also
, like other countries trend in 2012 was 60,000.
The table shows the proportion of total Linking Words
students
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number
in all countries except Use synonyms
America
had an improvement, and Use synonyms
Australia
was the Use synonyms
first
one by 19% in 2004; Use synonyms
then
a 5% increase in 2012. Linking Words
secondly
, the UK had 9% in the Linking Words
first
yearUse synonyms
,
and had a 4% rise. Remove the comma
apply
Thirdly
, Linking Words
Canada
with 5% in 2004, had the same percentage increase as the proportion of the USA in both years by 2 per cent.Use synonyms
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