The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present bar chart and table compare data about the
number
of pupils who stayed in 4 different English-speaking countries namely, the USA, the UK, Canada
, and Australia
in 2004 and 2012.
Overall
, the number
of foreign students
was rising; thereafter
, America
was the first
country in which students
emigrated for study, and the last
one was Canada
. Nevertheless
, Australia
had a large percentage of foreign students
instead
of America
.
According to
the Bar diagrams, the first
destination of migration students
was America
with 170,000 in 2004, then
this
number
increased to roughly 250 in 2012. The second level was the United Kingdom and Australia
which had absolutely the same amount in 2004 120,000; then
, these figures had approximately 80,000 clim. The last
one was Canada
which had 40,000 students
in 2004. Also
, like other countries trend in 2012 was 60,000.
The table shows the proportion of total students
number
in all countries except America
had an improvement, and Australia
was the first
one by 19% in 2004; then
a 5% increase in 2012. secondly
, the UK had 9% in the first
year,
and had a 4% rise. Remove the comma
apply
Thirdly
, Canada
with 5% in 2004, had the same percentage increase as the proportion of the USA in both years by 2 per cent.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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