Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, hoever, think that others types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been said that the government believes that

progress

equals success in the

economy

of a

country

.

Nonetheless

, others support the idea that a developed

country

requires more than a monetary investment.

In addition

, it should be given the same priority to them as the

economy

.

While

both sides are going to be discussed in the following essay, I strongly believe that having

an

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economical

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stability indeed could lead you to

progress

.

Nervertheless

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,

this

may not be the only resource to

put

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attention

on

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because other sectors,

such

as health and education, might have the same importance to reach a full development

country

. On one hand, it is

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that money equals power,

however

,

this

needs to be managed in the correct way to lead to progression.

Furthermore

, one of the

countries

with

better

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lifestyle is Luxemburg, which is known to have a brilliant

economy

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system that can confirm the given statement. As an example, despite the fact

that is

one of the

countries

with the highest

tax-rates

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, these are been used to improve not only the free education system,

additionally

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to give health attention to those who

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it in an effective way. The latter

support

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the fact that the money of the

country

needs to be

usen

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used

wisely to reach

the

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progress

, and

this

includes

to give

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the same importance to other sectors.

On the other hand

,

progress

is going to be

meausred

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measured

different

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depending

of

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the

country

.

While

there are some

countries

that

are lacking of

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monetary resources, they are rich in others

that

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make

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them

independet

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independent

and sustainable. A clear example of

this

,

are

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the islands located next to New Zealand that are nearly self-efficient because of the

nature

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resources that they have, which positions the money in the least important aspect

due to

the lack of

neccessity

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necessity

to import from other

countries

.

Moreover

, is important to highlight that these are unique exceptions and could not be

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that every

country

can have it.

To sum up

, is more likely to

persue

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pursue

progession

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progress

in the

country

if the

economy

is prioritised

although

, to maintain

the

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success

of

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it

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, it should be taken as a prior other

sectors

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apart from the

economical

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. If more fields are taken

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into underconsideration

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underconsideration

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consideration

,

this

might lead to a more balanced and developed nation.