Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, hoever, think that others types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been said that the government believes that

progress

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equals success in the

economy

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of a

country

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.

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, others support the idea that a developed

country

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requires more than a monetary investment.

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, it should be given the same priority to them as the

economy

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.

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both sides are going to be discussed in the following essay, I strongly believe that having

an

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economical

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stability indeed could lead you to

progress

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.

Nervertheless

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,

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may not be the only resource to

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attention

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because other sectors,

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as health and education, might have the same importance to reach a full development

country

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. On one hand, it is

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that money equals power,

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,

this

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needs to be managed in the correct way to lead to progression.

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, one of the

countries

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with

better

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lifestyle is Luxemburg, which is known to have a brilliant

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economy

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system that can confirm the given statement. As an example, despite the fact

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one of the

countries

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with the highest

tax-rates

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tax rates

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, these are been used to improve not only the free education system,

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additionally

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to give health attention to those who

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it in an effective way. The latter

support

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the fact that the money of the

country

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needs to be

usen

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used

wisely to reach

the

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progress

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, and

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includes

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the same importance to other sectors.

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,

progress

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is going to be

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measured

different

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depending

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the

country

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.

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there are some

countries

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that

are lacking of

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monetary resources, they are rich in others

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make

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them

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independent

and sustainable. A clear example of

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,

are

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the islands located next to New Zealand that are nearly self-efficient because of the

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resources that they have, which positions the money in the least important aspect

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the lack of

neccessity

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necessity

to import from other

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.

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, is important to highlight that these are unique exceptions and could not be

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that every

country

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can have it.

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, is more likely to

persue

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pursue

progession

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progress

in the

country

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if the

economy

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is prioritised

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, to maintain

the

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success

of

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it

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, it should be taken as a prior other

sectors

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sector

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apart from the

economical

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economy

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. If more fields are taken

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into underconsideration

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underconsideration

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consideration

,

this

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might lead to a more balanced and developed nation.