The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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bar graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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of
trips
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made (in millions) by school-going children each year using five different modes of transport from a specific country in two years, 1990 and 2010.
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, walking was the most popular method to travel to and from school in 1990
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cars
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were favoured in 2010.
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,
cars
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were the least preferred mode of transport in 1990
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cycling was the least used method in 2010. Analysing the graph
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, walking accounted for just over 12
million
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trips
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in 1990 and
cars
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accounted for around 4
million
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trips
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. By 2010 a reverse trend was observed with
cars
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being the most preferred method at approximately 11
million
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trips
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and walking responsible for 6
million
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trips
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.
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, the usage of buses was at around 7
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trips
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in 1990 and dropped by 2
million
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trips
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over three decades. Similar amounts of cycling and both walking and bus were used in 1990 at around 6
million
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trips
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,
this
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figure fell by approximately 2
million
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and 1.5
million
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for cycling and the combined usage of both walking and bus respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, cars, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trips
  • children
  • modes of transport
  • walk
  • cycle
  • public transport
  • drive
  • car
  • trends
  • decrease
  • increase
  • shift
  • convenient
  • comfortable
  • commuting
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • significant
  • indicate
  • reasons
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • 20-year period
  • doubled
  • considerable margin
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