In our contemporary era ,it
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for families to have at least one private car,
the fact that we more and more rely on vehicles has its own drawbacks
as progressive contamination of
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and negative
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on
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peoples’Correct your spelling
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way of living
Despite the fact that the advent of
transport which happened nearly 150 years ago was
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for that period of time
we’ve
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addicted to luxuries and
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doesn’t play in our hands.
, in Shymkent , OKMPU
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has conducted
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that justified that
who have cars spend
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39% less time on any
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,and that in turn leads to the problems with cardiovascular system and back aches.
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who were in the category of those who possessed means of transport , have confessed that they feel anxious and rueful cause of their health issues which occurred
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lifestyle.
The
and arguably more evident issue is environmental disasters . Enormous numbers of cars
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a reason
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air contamination in several countries ,on
basis quantity of newborn children with oncological diseases
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raisedVerb problem
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.
, Indian researchers have examined newborn children whose parents resided in
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with hazardous air
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and they found that
percentageCorrect article usage
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of cancer diseases overweigh in
category of
.
To counter these destructive problems ,government
organisationFix the agreement mistake
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must provide healthy living in mass media by organising marathons and producing
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whereCorrect word choice
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will
be introducedWrong verb form
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and
announcedWrong verb form
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these problems.
, in
a group of
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influencers organised
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competition which was focused on struggling with obesity. In
competition 400
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participationReplace the word
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and
challenge competitors admitted that during the process of
they
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observed positive changes in their bodies.With
approach
the
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of
who
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suffering because of drawbacks of car over-usage could be significantly reduced
In conclusion the drivers of means of transport today encounter noticeable
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the Correct article usage
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first glance ,but series troubles for them and
theirsCorrect the word
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offspring.
, with combined efforts of government and prominent
it’s possible to address
issue and cultivate
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nation