The pie charts show the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts below display what
did
people Verb problem
apply
purchase
the most in 1971 and 2001 in Wrong verb form
purchased
UK
.
As we can see, in 1971, Great Britain citizens spent about half of their money on food. Slightly above one-fifth of their budget was used for cars and exactly one-tenth of their cash was spent Correct article usage
the UK
for
petrol for these cars. Furniture, restaurants and books represented close results, with 9, 7 and 6 Change preposition
on
percents
. Fix the agreement mistake
percent
However
, computers struggled at that time with only 2 percents
but it makes sense. Cause, computers were not as functional as today's gadgets.
The second pie chart Fix the agreement mistake
percent
illustarates
a lot more different results. Correct your spelling
illustrates
Firstly
, British people spent most of their money on cars back then
, while
food and restaurant
showed the same percentage of 14. And here we see, that Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
Correct article usage
the computers
computers
industry Change the noun form
computer
made
Verb problem
has
an
Correct article usage
apply
increase
in its popularity, getting to 12 Replace the word
increased
percent
. Furniture and petrol Change the spelling
per cent
also
showed the same outcome, being 8%. And books fell down way too much, down to 1 percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, British folk spent money very wisely. Everything on these charts are
very important and they tend to be careful with their cash, which is a big positive point.
WT1Change the verb form
is
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