The pie charts show the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts below display what
did
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people
purchase
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purchased
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the most in 1971 and 2001 in
UK
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the UK
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. As we can see, in 1971, Great Britain citizens spent about half of their money on food. Slightly above one-fifth of their budget was used for cars and exactly one-tenth of their cash was spent
for
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on
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petrol for these cars. Furniture, restaurants and books represented close results, with 9, 7 and 6
percents
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percent
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.
However
, computers struggled at that time with only 2
percents
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percent
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but it makes sense. Cause, computers were not as functional as today's gadgets. The second pie chart
illustarates
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illustrates
a lot more different results.
Firstly
, British people spent most of their money on cars back
then
,
while
food and
restaurant
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restaurants
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showed the same percentage of 14. And here we see, that
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the computers
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computers
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industry
made
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an
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apply
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increase
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in its popularity, getting to 12
percent
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per cent
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. Furniture and petrol
also
showed the same outcome, being 8%. And books fell down way too much, down to 1
percent
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per cent
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.
Overall
, British folk spent money very wisely. Everything on these charts
are
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very important and they tend to be careful with their cash, which is a big positive point. WT1
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