The pie charts present the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts illustrate the UK population's
money wasting
pattern in two years.
Add a hyphen
money-wasting
Overall
, it is clear that
food and car pieces which had the majority of
percentage stayed in first and second places. Change preposition
apply
However
, all types of expending
proportions in each section changed.
Correct your spelling
expanding
Firstly
, there were three sections which increased during 30 years. Restaurant spendings
which was 7 Fix the agreement mistake
spending
percent
in 1971, doubled in 2001. Meanwhile, computers outline customs upsurge from 2% till
12%. In 1971 cars which were in second place with 22 Change preposition
to
percent
, became first with 43 percent
.
Secondly
, four sections were decreased . Furniture and petrol spendings
didn’t lose a big percentage . Fix the agreement mistake
spending
While
furniture lost 1 percent
from 9 till 8. At the same time
petrol lost 2 Add a comma
time,
percent
. Meanwhile, people have reduced book purchases by 1 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, which was 6% in 1971. Food disbursing habits suffered Change the spelling
per cent
great
loss from 44% to 14% , Correct article usage
a great
however
stayed in Add a comma
however,
top
three.Correct article usage
the top
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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