Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Part of society is concerned about sharing data as much as they can, regarding the scientific investigation ,economy and education system. Some others are awareness to be shared independently the most necessary and important data.In
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I discuss both views and my take on them.
As a whole, scientific investors very essential to the development of both the economy and the education field. As an Add a comma
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the coronary catheter which is an unremarkable invention of science, is used to open the coronary artery blocks. Add a comma
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After
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greatest finding gradually decreased the death percentage by heart attack. As a result
, cardiology studies and further
research fields developed and most international cardiac educational sessions were organised. Additionally
, the various qualities, sizes and different brands of coronary catheter products and manufacturers whole
over the world, Rephrase
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dramatically spread of cardiac business world.
On the other hand
, the most dangerous economic academic research is diseases. Recently covid-19 epidemic has been one of extraordinarily negative aspects of the above-mentioned three factors. Most of the selfish behaviour of the science, knowledge sharing with marketing. Also
, the nucleus invention had been threatened to
the ordinary earth. Meanwhile, some people believe that there should be restrictions or limits to sharing information on those credentials.
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To conclude
, I agree with the first statement and on the other hand
, we need to maintain internal rules, regulations and attitudes upon these perceptions.Submitted by amalitharangani0Most of villagers are changing their accommodations from villages to cities all around the world. As a result of this countryside residents are lower than town areas.I think this is a negative development and in this essay, I will elaborate my perspectives furthermore.
According to this situation, my take on this is, different of the facilities between the town and the village. As an example, there are lots of shopping centres in the city such as house- hold items, clothes, stationeries, vehicles and so on. Conversely, developed educational centres, schools, hospitals with enough facilities are also at the urban areas. Nevertheless, there are lots of companies and unlimited job opportunities in the city area. Also, mostly there are continuous electricity, gas,water and well planned and punctual transport system as well. So people prefer to live in comfortably and moving to cities as they possible.
Additionally, villagers and town people's have same basic need. Such as food, accommodation, education, good health and freedom as well. In some countries there is unavailable electricity in the countryside. Also, there is poor transport system, teachers and facilities at village schools. Moreover, sometimes not enough medications and human resources. So countryside people preferred to move to town. Finally, countryside population decreased and urbanisation in cities.
In a nutshell, if there is as usual same facilities all over the city and rural areas,as there is lots of freedom in the countryside . My point of view is around the world this point is most prominent in developing countries.
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task achievement
Ensure that both views are discussed in a balanced manner. One view seems to be covered more extensively by using detailed examples.
coherence cohesion
Clarify your main points and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Some transitions between ideas need to be smoother.
coherence cohesion
The essay has an introduction and a conclusion, which provides a clear structure.
task achievement
The essay uses relevant examples to support the arguments presented, such as the coronary catheter in scientific research and the COVID-19 pandemic.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.