The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of people in Britain who donate to charity,

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into five age groups, in 1990 and 2010.

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, charity funding had declined in younger ages, those below 50,

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it increased in the older age groups. The highest

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were those aged 36 to 50 in 1990,

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changed to those aged 51 to 60 in 2010. The largest drop in percentage was seen in the ages of 18 to 25, where donations were reduced by around 10%.

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was followed by those aged 36 to 50 and those aged 26 to 35, a 7% decrease each. Moving to the groups that grew in charity giving, those aged 51 to 60 gave at 35% in 1990, and

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changed to 39% in 2010. A decrease to a lesser extent was the above 65 years old group, which was at 32% in 1990 to

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to 35% in 2010.

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The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Write a letter to apologise on particualr job you agreed to take during summer vacation due to some unforeseen circumstances. - Explain the Situation - An apology - Express that you would be interested in the position next summer.

With growing number of populations in cities. Many people are living in small homes that do not have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?