The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of people in Britain who donate to charity,
seperated
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separated
into five age groups, in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, charity funding had declined in younger ages, those below 50,
while
it increased in the older age groups. The highest
donaters
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donators
were those aged 36 to 50 in 1990,
whereas
this
changed to those aged 51 to 60 in 2010. The largest drop in percentage was seen in the ages of 18 to 25, where donations were reduced by around 10%.
This
was followed by those aged 36 to 50 and those aged 26 to 35, a 7% decrease each. Moving to the groups that grew in charity giving, those aged 51 to 60 gave at 35% in 1990, and
this
then
changed to 39% in 2010. A decrease to a lesser extent was the above 65 years old group, which was at 32% in 1990 to
then
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to 35% in 2010.
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