The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs indicate the percentage of households with washing machines,
refrigerators
, and Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
per household between 1920 and 2019. The Use synonyms
overall
trends show the percentage of electrical appliances was increasing over time, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of time spent on Use synonyms
housework
was declining.
In 1920, not even half of the population owned electrical appliances, Use synonyms
such
as washing machines, Linking Words
refrigerators
and Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
. Only 40% of the households had a washing machine in 1920, whilst the percentage of households who owned Use synonyms
refrigerators
and Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
was smaller with only 30% and 1% respectively. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
kept increasing every year until the Use synonyms
number
of families who had Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
and Use synonyms
refrigerators
in their Use synonyms
home
reached 100%. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Additionally
, the Linking Words
amount
of families who chose to buy washing machines Change the quantifier
number
was
increasing, albeit a smaller rise, with only a 35% increase.
Change the verb form
were
Consequently
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
per household was dropping significantly. In 1920, people spent 50 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
doing their Use synonyms
housework
, like washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning. Use synonyms
However
, that Linking Words
number
dropped to only 10 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
in 2019.
All-in-all, there was a negative correlation between the ratio of family with electrical appliances and the amount of Use synonyms
housework
per Use synonyms
week
between 1920-2019. The ratio of electrical appliance ownership kept rising, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
hours
spent doing Use synonyms
housework
per Use synonyms
week
kept declining.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerators, vacuum, cleaners, number, hours, housework, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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