The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs indicate the percentage of households with washing machines,
refrigerators
, and vacuum
cleaners
and the number
of hours
of housework
per household between 1920 and 2019. The overall
trends show the percentage of electrical appliances was increasing over time, while
the number
of time spent on housework
was declining.
In 1920, not even half of the population owned electrical appliances, such
as washing machines, refrigerators
and vacuum
cleaners
. Only 40% of the households had a washing machine in 1920, whilst the percentage of households who owned refrigerators
and vacuum
cleaners
was smaller with only 30% and 1% respectively. This
number
kept increasing every year until the number
of families who had vacuum
cleaners
and refrigerators
in their home
reached 100%. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Additionally
, the amount
of families who chose to buy washing machines Change the quantifier
number
was
increasing, albeit a smaller rise, with only a 35% increase.
Change the verb form
were
Consequently
, the number
of hours
of housework
per household was dropping significantly. In 1920, people spent 50 hours
per week
doing their housework
, like washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning. However
, that number
dropped to only 10 hours
per week
in 2019.
All-in-all, there was a negative correlation between the ratio of family with electrical appliances and the amount of housework
per week
between 1920-2019. The ratio of electrical appliance ownership kept rising, while
the hours
spent doing housework
per week
kept declining.Submitted by rianadmaja on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerators, vacuum, cleaners, number, hours, housework, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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