The pie charts below shows the main reason why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007

The pie charts below shows the main reason why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007
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The pie charts illustrate how many students studied at a local UK university for several reasons between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
, there was a downward trend in the proportion of people who chose to learn at that school because of the quality of teaching, the good spots and social activities and the quality of resources.
While
the opposite can be seen in the figure for the suitable degree courses and the close to parents.
in addition
, the major of undergraduates determined to learn at the UK university for the appropriate certification. The percentage of students who chose that university related to a degree stood at 35% in 1987, after that it increased by 2% in 2007, which always recorded the highest point in two given periods.
Similarly
, the figure for those who were nearly their parents rose significantly from 10% to 22% in 10 years. 15%
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for teaching in 1987, with a subsequent decline to 8%
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10 years later. In the meanwhile, the figure for undergraduates, whose reason for the facilities and community activities fell dramatically by 13% (from 19% to 6%) between 1987 and 2007. after decreasing by 4%, the number of pupils, who thought the school had a high standard of materials reached 17% in 2007.
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