In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this ? how can people research this ?
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background
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inheritance
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whether
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inheritance
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methods
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as interviewing their elder, or learning from their heritage.Submitted by mukarramailham on
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