The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given table provides information about the residents of certain countries' expenditure on three main categories of services in 2002. These
region
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are Ireland , Italy , Spain, Sweden and Turkey. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Food, drink and tobacco are more likely to purchase items for people in certain
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than
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clothing and leisure. In Turkey, the major category of expenditure was Food , Drink and tobacco, which accounted for 32.14% of total spending.
This
was almost twice the level of spending in
this
class in Sweden and Italy which ranked 4th and 5th at 16.36% and 15.77%. Clothing and footwear made up 9.0% of total expenditure in Italy which ranked 1st position respectively. In Ireland, Spain, Sweden and Turkey the categories of clothing and footwear were very similar accounting for 6.63, 6.43, 6.51 and 5.40%. Leisure and education is the lowest spending among the 5 countries.
Overall
, the major category of spending was food, drink and tobacco over the countries.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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