WRITING TASK 1 The graph below shows the average trip length (in miles) among U.S. children aged 5 to 15 years old.

WRITING TASK 1

The graph below shows the average trip length (in miles) among U.S. children aged 5 to 15 years old.
The graph illustrates the average trip range among Children aged 5 to 15 years old in the USA.
Overall
, the most noticeable fact is that in spite of some fluctuations, most transportation modes used by youngsters increased and travel by conventional way decreased over 5 decades.
Firstly
, bus trips by US young ages were seen as the most popular transportation mode, reaching almost 40
miles
in 2020.
In contrast
, though having the same average in 1970, cycling experienced a significant decline at under 20
miles
.
On the other hand
, despite showing fluctuation, trains still rise up
at the end
reaching more than 20
miles
, showing a slightly similar length with taxi usage.
Furthermore
, whilst showing positive progress until the third decade, the trip length by car experienced a gradual dip in the
last
2 decades but still presents higher distance than in the past 5 decades, ranging approximately 28
miles
.
Conversely
, walking seems not too popular for children in most of the years as the length went down steadily and accounted for the shortest in 2020
although
a steady incline was reported levelled off at around 18
miles
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average trip length
  • miles
  • implications
  • safety
  • health
  • social aspects
  • urban development
  • transportation options
  • societal shifts
  • age groups
  • developmental factors
  • independence
  • technological advances
  • mobility
  • ride-sharing apps
  • public transportation
  • environmental implications
  • carbon emissions
  • societal goals
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