The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predicitions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph provides information about the number of living people in the
Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand
, and Indonesia
from 1970 to 2020 followed by the forecast for 2030 and 2040.
It can be seen that from 1970 to 2020, the society's percentage fluctuated in the Philippines
and Thailand
, while
Malaysia
and Indonesia
increased moderately. Subsequently
, the projection for 2030 to 2040 increased gradually for all countries.
From 1970 to 1990, the percentage of the population in the Philippines
reached almost 50%,
and had a downfall to 40% in 2020. Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, the number of living people in Thailand
stabilized by 25% from 1990 to 2020. Moreover
, Malaysia
and Indonesia
gained 70% of population in 2020.
In addition
, the prophecy for the living society in 2030 and 2024 for four countries has risen slowly by 25% to 35% in Thailand
, 45% to 50% in the Philippines
, 57% to 60% in Indonesia
, and 80% to 82% in Malaysia
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