The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the improvement of cutting tools in the
Stone
Age. Overall
, the given diagram witnessed significant changes about
tools' views Change preposition
in
except
their heights in 6 million Add the preposition
except for
years
.
Begin with Tool
A, this
have
3 views of Change the verb form
has
stone
which were used Change preposition
for cutting
cutting
purposes Change preposition
for cutting
Change preposition
apply
in
1.4 million Change preposition
apply
years
ago. The tool
was 5 cm height
and Change preposition
in height
have
Wrong verb form
had
copped
Correct article usage
a copped
shape
. In terms of Tool
B, this
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
3 views about stone
and this
cutting stone
noticeably dramatically changed and reached more architectural illustration.
In view
of front
, Correct article usage
the front
Tool
A getting
bigger and Wrong verb form
got
getting
a diamond Wrong verb form
got
shape
over the given 6 million years
. Tool
B, in side
Correct article usage
the side
view
, getting
thicker and sharper in the given time period. In terms of Wrong verb form
gets
back
Correct article usage
the back
view
, Tool
A were
resembled of triangle Unnecessary verb
apply
shape
and changed in years
and finally
reach
and diamond Wrong verb form
reached
shape
like its front view
.
Tool
A's
and Change noun form
A
Tool
B's
which Change noun form
B
used
for cutting aims, have Add a missing verb
are used
same
heights in the given time periods, at 5 cm for both.Correct article usage
the same
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stone, years, tool, shape, view with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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