Task 1: The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The
digram
illustrates the typical change for Correct your spelling
diagram
office
building from Japanese matter to Ameriacan
Correct your spelling
American
office
matter.
It can
clear that the place has changed significantly. To illustrate, four Verb problem
is
facility
Change to a plural noun
facilities
has
been added in Correct subject-verb agreement
have
second
Change the article
the second
digram
.Correct your spelling
diagram
Furthermore
, some sections have been arranged.
Looking in
the maps Change preposition
at
to
more Change preposition
for
detailes
,we can Correct your spelling
detail
seen
that in Change the verb form
see
Correct article usage
the Japanease
Japanease
Correct your spelling
Japanese
office
, there are only three scection
. two Correct your spelling
sections
section
departments
Fix the agreement mistake
department
maneger
have been arranged in front of Correct your spelling
manager
managers
other
. Correct determiner usage
each other
In contrast
, the department mannger
Correct your spelling
manager
in
the middle. with one window.
Add a missing verb
is in
On the other hand
, in the American office
, many facillity
Correct your spelling
facilities
has
been added Correct subject-verb agreement
have
such
as,
Remove the comma
apply
printer
Correct article usage
a printer
coper
, conference room and Correct your spelling
copier
storge
. In Correct your spelling
storage
addion
to Correct your spelling
addition
thatm
the Correct your spelling
that
office
tables have been reranged
in Correct your spelling
arranged
rearranged
Change the article
a diffrent
diffrent
manner in the Correct your spelling
different
middel
of the Correct your spelling
middle
the
building. Remove the redundancy
apply
Moreover
, the manger
sections and department section Correct your spelling
manager
hav
been replaced in the walls Correct your spelling
have
in
Change preposition
on
right
side of the Add an article
the right
office
with attached a big window.Submitted by btool.taher on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words office with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
▼
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!