The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total weight of imported
tea
and
coffee
in Canada, the US, the
UK
and
Germany
, measured in
tonnes
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
UK
has the highest
amount
of imported
tea
and
Germany
is the highest importer of
coffee
.
According to
the data, the total
amount
of imported
tea
in the
UK
is the highest during the period, at 80,000
tonnes
.
In addition
, people in
Germany
receive imported
tea
by around half of the
amount
that the people in the
UK
received
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receive
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. Canadians and the Americans
import
Wrong verb form
imported
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the same
amount
of
tea
from other countries,
amounted
Correct pronoun usage
which amounted
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to a quarter
amount
of
tea
received by the British.
On the other hand
,
Germany
received 50,000
tonnes
of imported
coffee
,
while
Canada and the US
purchase
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purchased
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imported
coffee
at the same
amount
, just one-fifth fewer than the Germans.
Furthermore
, the
amount
of imported
coffee
in the
UK
is the lowest among the other three countries by 30,000
tonnes
. Interestingly, there is a similar proportion of imported
tea
and
coffee
in Canada and the US throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.

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