The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total weight of imported
tea
and coffee
in Canada, the US, the UK
and Germany
, measured in tonnes
. Overall
, it is clear that
the UK
has the highest amount
of imported tea
and Germany
is the highest importer of coffee
.
According to
the data, the total amount
of imported tea
in the UK
is the highest during the period, at 80,000 tonnes
. In addition
, people in Germany
receive imported tea
by around half of the amount
that the people in the UK
received
. Canadians and the Americans Wrong verb form
receive
import
the same Wrong verb form
imported
amount
of tea
from other countries, amounted
to a quarter Correct pronoun usage
which amounted
amount
of tea
received by the British.
On the other hand
, Germany
received 50,000 tonnes
of imported coffee
, while
Canada and the US purchase
imported Replace the word
purchased
coffee
at the same amount
, just one-fifth fewer than the Germans. Furthermore
, the amount
of imported coffee
in the UK
is the lowest among the other three countries by 30,000 tonnes
. Interestingly, there is a similar proportion of imported tea
and coffee
in Canada and the US throughout the period.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, uk, germany, tonnes, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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