students are under peer pressure . do the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

The debate over the consequences of the peer pressure placed on youngsters

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sparked considerable debate. In my opinion, despite the few benefits of

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notion, its detriments are

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higher significance

due to

the reasons

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essay

further

elaborates on.

One

major negative impact of

this

phenomenon is on the youth's mentality. During a constant comparison they conduct between themselves and

others

, they suffer from the potential superiority of

others

. As they lack critical thinking skills and

thus

, cannot comprehend the difference between

people

's capabilities,

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failure leads to them acknowledging

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With

this

feeling accumulating , they'd become more prone to mental conditions

such

as depression.

Moreover

, their inability to focus on themselves and relentlessly wanting to mimic their peers often contribute to a shattered confidence, jeopardizing

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mental health

further

. Take a student as an example; who is eager to participate in football since

one

's peers are doing so, whilst not having adequate agility.

Consequently

, the student would experience tough times preparing for a field that doesn't suit his abilities, prior to pinning his self-conception on

this

failure and fostering a sense of self-doubt.

However

, there are

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positive implications of

this

pressure worth noting.

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influenced by

others

proves beneficial is youngsters' disruptive

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. By serving as

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looking at

others

and noticing positive

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of

others

are being rewarded, they'd undertake them less frequently;

therefore

, gain societal acceptance.

Furthermore

, looking at those who are of consciencious personality serves

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an incentive, enticing the young

people

to put efforts into achieving their milestones.

Hence

, they'd be more likely to succeed in their professional, educational, or personal lives. To illustrate, Elon Musl once reported

one

of his classmates being inspired by him and inventing a novel gadget which brought him both fortune and fame among society. Given the effectiveness of these positive implications, they come at the expense of damaging individuals' mentality and self-confidence. In conclusion,

although

the way young

people

are influenced by same-aged

people

may result in discipline and an enhanced attitude, I firmly believe it would be devastatingly detrimental to their mindset, surpassing the merits. In fact, it contributes to self-doubt, damaged confidence and proneness to numerous mental conditions, posing

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to their well-being.