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The charts below shows the most popular film genres among men and women, along with general ticket sales for various types of films in the USA in 2010.

The charts below shows the most popular film genres among men and women, along with general ticket sales for various types of films in the USA in 2010.
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The following charts display general ticket
sales
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 for various film genres in the United States in 2010
along with
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 the most popular films by gender for both
men
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 and
women
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.
Overall
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, the graphs show that action films were the most popular
genre
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. Another interesting point is that the number of
men
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 who watched
this
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genre
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 was more than
women
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. Looking at the details, the number of
men
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 who watched action movies was significantly higher than that of
women
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, with around 40
men
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 and 25
women
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, respectively.
However
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, when it comes to romantic
comedy
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, the number of
women
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 interested in
this
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genre
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 was about six times higher than that of
men
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. Another striking point is that the interest in
comedy
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 was twice as high as the interest in
westerns
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 for both genders. The least popular genres were thriller and science fiction, with
women
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 showing less interest in these compared to
men
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. Regarding box-office takings, action films were the most sold type, accounting for approximately 49% of the total
sales
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, which was about twice as much as
comedy
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 at 24%. The third most popular
genre
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 in terms of ticket
sales
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 was romantic
comedy
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 at 12%, slightly higher than thriller at 10%. The least purchased category was other genres, making up 5% of the total
sales
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.
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