Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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it is widely claimed that an extinction of a particular

species

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of

palnts

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plants

and

wildlifes

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wildlife

is considered a major threat

of

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today's environmental issue, others argue that there are more vital

issue

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issues

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such

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as

climate

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changes

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that need to be tackled

with

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immediately. Both

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of

views

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and reasons why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in

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essay.

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with, it may

seems

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sensible for some to

believed

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that the loss of

an

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particular

species

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will negatively impact on food web just like

a the

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an

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unbalance

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scale.

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is

possibly

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because these animals or plants

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act as

a

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prey and

predator

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which

know

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to be the key factors in balancing the environments. Without some

species

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, the number of

predator

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could

outnumbered

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its

preys

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which

leading

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to another risk of

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extinction of

species

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. Take,

ants

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and trees.

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; the tree

gain

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its

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protection from

ants

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againts

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against

the plant eater animals and the

ants

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received

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nectar and its nest in return. Without the

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ants

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the tree could have been gone

due to

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herbivores.

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, many

opponent

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of

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opposed

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that there

is

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important environmental problems

that

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is

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threatening

for

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humankind like

the

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climate

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change

needed

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to be focused

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instead

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. To simply explain,

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issue

pose

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a severe and lethal effect

toward

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not only all

species

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on

Earth

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but

also

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the

Earth

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itself. In

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respect, there is

an

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evident

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showing that the

the

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ozone layer depletion causing the

Earth

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to be

warmera

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warmer

and melting the ice in the

pole

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making the sea level higher. In my view, I personally argue in favour of

climate

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change as it

affect

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the environment as a whole and wide range.

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, The rise of

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sea temperature affected

on

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the

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nature in

numerous

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way

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such

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as

a

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abnormal natural event like El

nino

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and

la

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nina.

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warmer water stream in the sea could affect the weather on

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. In conclusion,

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it is undeniable that the extinction of a

species

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could create a serious threat to the environment in terms of

unbalanced

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food web, I am of the opinion that

climate

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change

is needed

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to be

emphasis

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now in order to prevent

Earth

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from numerous detrimental effects.