The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table provides information on the amount of portable mobiles sold by five major technology companies from 2006 to 2012, with each number representing a million sold.
Ericsson
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showed a clear downward trend, even when the former started with an optimistic one. Use synonyms
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started with 74 in 2006 and increased to 102 in 2007, the rest of its Use synonyms
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Motorola
started with 210 in 2006 without any notable change outside of a sharp fall. By 2012, Use synonyms
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skyrocketed to 135.8 in 2012. Samsung was not facing the same problems, it had 117 in 2006 and consistently rose to 396.5 in 2012.
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had the strongest start with 345 in 2006. It had a generally fluctuated trend, Use synonyms
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reached its highest point of 475 in 2008 before it fell to 442 in 2009. It increased again to 463 in 2010, and the graph ended with a dive for Use synonyms
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to 335 in 2012.
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