The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from eggs to adult fish.
The given diagram illustrates various stages in the
life
of a salmon
.
Overall
, there are seven main steps in the development of the salmon
over approximately eight years, from eggs
to mature fish. It is also
noticeable that the natural process lasts from hatching eggs
to being mature and spawning.
In the first stage of the life
cycle, in the freshwater environment, eggs
take around three months to hatch into the baby salmon
, which is called the Alevin. After that, it feeds off the yolk sac for several weeks and spends five to ten weeks developing into the Fry and having the ability to swim.
In the following steps of the life
cycle, the salmon
experiences some physical changes. It develops " finger" markings. One to ten years later, it grows quickly in size and heads out to the sea. After the smolt period, the adult stays in the ocean between
one and six years. Change preposition
for between
Finally
, the salmon
reaches the spawning adult period when it returns to the freshwater environment in order to lay eggs
and die within two weeks and the life
cycle starts againSubmitted by nguyenhoanganhquan918 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words life, salmon, eggs with synonyms.
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