The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table depicts information about the metro systems in six countries around the world with data on length,
capacity
, and completion year. In brief,
MRT
systems which tend to be newer are shorter, with the exception of Los Angeles. Meanwhile, their maximum passenger capacities
also
differ across countries. To start with the first indicator, London is the longest
MRT
with 1100
kilometers
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, which is far higher than its follower - Paris at 594
kilometers
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. And, Tokyo
MRT
, which comes in third at 149
kilometers
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, is just a quarter of Paris' length.
However
, it still surpasses the combined lengths of the remaining three
MRT
systems in the table: Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles Turning into the
capacity
, London only ranks
third,
with 548 million people
while
Tokyo is the winner in the number of
MRT
passengers it can carry, with a
capacity
of 1434 million people, nearly triple London’s. Similar to Tokyo, despite a shorter length, Paris’ carrying
capacity
is much larger than the longest one - London.
However
, Kyoto still has the lowest
capacity
with 11 million.
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