You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend. In this letter: Asking him or her to bring some things from home which you are need Saying why you need them Making arrangement to meet
I
hope
you are great and good
healthy. I am happy to hear from you that you Correct word choice
apply
visit
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are visiting
australia
next month Change the capitalization
Australia
gor
just relaxing and travelling for several days.
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or
for
Firstly
, I can not express my
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the
happines
in Correct your spelling
happiness
world
, first of all, I can and should say that we are going to meet after one year and I Add an article
the world
hope
you have been doing great all this
time. I am writing to ask you a big favour and do not forget about it. I hope
and need my sepecial
things from my home. I would be Correct your spelling
special
blessfully
happy if you could come and bring them Correct your spelling
blissfully
along with
you.
The first thing my
essential book about being Add a missing verb
is my
successful
businessman. It was given to me by my best friend. It is Add an article
a successful
absolutelly
necessary to me for my life. Correct your spelling
absolutely
secondly
I wan
to eat the cake which was prepared by my mother. Because Correct your spelling
want
that is
really yummy.
I hope
it is not difficult and you will cause you comfident
. Do not worry, call me and send your location when you visit Correct your spelling
confident
australia
. I try to pick up you from the airportChange the capitalization
Australia
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single idea per paragraph
Work on organizing your paragraphs better by focusing on one main idea in each paragraph. This will improve the overall clarity and coherence of your letter.
complete response
Pay attention to spelling and grammatical issues to ensure your letter reads smoothly and professionally.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are clear and appropriate, creating a friendly tone for the letter.
complete response
You have successfully covered all aspects of the task: asking for things, explaining why you need them, and making arrangements to meet.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.