Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments dive more financial support to local films industries?
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about
the tendency toward watching foreign Change preposition
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movies
has always remained as
a hot topic as a lot of individuals abroad prefer to watch Change preposition
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instead
of indoor ones. This
essay will give you the reasons and some recommendations how
it could be solved.
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To begin
with, people have always been curious about other nations, their culture and language pushing them to find some sources to gain some data and what could be better than films in this
case. Not only can the movies
picture the country’s advantages impressively but also
introduce their rich and superior customs and even natures in order to impress other lands and foreigners. Additionally
, there may be some people who might be in deed learning that nations
language. In Change noun form
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this
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films which Add a comma
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a lot of daily conversations can really be profitable for them.
From another perspective, Correct subject-verb agreement
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this
preference can bring some demerits for their own countries. Not attending to watch local movies
will definitely result in a decrease in commercial rates which may lead to greater problems for the producer and director and in
a large scale for the nation. Change preposition
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Tough in
order to solve Correct word choice
In
this
problem, governors must allocate more budget to this
industry and facilitate these occasions for the producers in order to encourage their own citizens to support their film industry by watching their local channels.
In a nutshell, although
watching some international movies
may help you boost your language skills and makes
you familiar with other Correct subject-verb agreement
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culture
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To improve the logical structure, ensure that each paragraph follows a clear argument and flows smoothly. Use transitional phrases to connect ideas logically.
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Provide more specific examples to support your arguments. This will make your points more convincing and detailed.
coherence cohesion
Work on using more varied and sophisticated language, as well as checking for small grammatical errors to improve clarity and cohesiveness.
task achievement
The essay addresses the task effectively, covering both reasons for the preference and the potential solutions.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and appropriately frame the essay.
task achievement
The essay demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and provides relevant points for both parts of the question.
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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