The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
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The two pie charts show the results of a questionnaire given to 100
guests
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of Parkway
Hotel
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in 2005 and 2010 which asked them to rate the
hotel
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's customer service.
Overall
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, the two charts
shows
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many differences. In 2005, almost half the
guests
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gave the
hotel
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a satisfactory rating, and more than a third thought the
hotel
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had very poor or poor service. Fast forward 5 years, and there are notable changes: three-fifths gave the
hotel
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a good or excellent score, and less than a fifth of the
guests
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gave the accommodation bad
ratings
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. Looking at the first graph, it can be noted the excellent and good
ratings
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made up the smallest percentages, with only 5% and 14%.
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, the satisfactory scores took the majority with 45%. In second and third place are poor and very poor
ratings
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, with 21% and 15% respectively, taking up more than one-third of the graph Moving on to the second graph, the first place is now taken by good
ratings
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, followed by excellent scores at 39% and 28% in that order. The satisfactory reviews have now dropped by 28%, sitting at 17%. Poor and very poor
ratings
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now take up less than
one fifth
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of the graphs, having only 12 and 4
guests
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giving
such
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ratings
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. It is apparent that
at the end
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of the decade, customers are leaving much more positive reviews for
this
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hotel
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Vocabulary: Replace the words guests, hotel, ratings with synonyms.
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