You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided table gives information about the ratio of student attendance in four particular
schools
including (Grammar Schools
, Specialist Schools
, Voluntary-controlled Schools
and Community
Schools
, over a period of three years 2000,2005 and 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that the first year had the highest rate of attendance for all schools
except Community
School. Moreover
, Community
institutions experienced an upward trend, while
the majority of them witnessed gradual and sharp declines.
To begin
with, the number of pupils who attended Specialist and Grammar institutions had a gradual drop in 2005 and 2009 which reached 10% and 12% respectively. In addition
, Voluntary- Controlled institutions had a significant decline in 2005 and 2009 respectively at 20 per cent.
On the other hand
, the amount
of people who attended Change the quantifier
number
Community
school rose significantly from 12% in 2000to
32 per cent in 2005 and 58 per cent in 2009.Correct your spelling
2000 to
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, community with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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