Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Few individuals

believes

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that old

buildings

and houses should change with sophisticated

buildings

. Whilst, some

believes

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that

conservation

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the conservation

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of old

monuments

should be wise.

This

essay believes that

conservation

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the conservation

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of old

buildings

should be focused

because

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on because

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it protects

culture

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the culture

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and

heritage

value of

nation

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the nation

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.

Heritage

constructions should be protected and conserved. Many

nations

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GDP depends on

tourism

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the tourism

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sector.

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is because people

form

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from

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the all around world

visits

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nations to see old

monuments

and other

heritage

architectures

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architecture

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.

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, many European countries like Italy, Greece, etc,

depends

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on

tourism

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sector. Old

buildings

are

heritage

or unique identification of any nation.

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, Taj

Mahel

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Mahal

,

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is one of

seven

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wonders of India and generates high revenue which is completely higher than new

buildings

if it built there. Some

heritage

monuments

can cause accidents if not maintained regularly.

This

can cause into expensive budget. So,

this

type of

buildings

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building

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should be demolished and new sophisticated

buildings

should

be build

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be built

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.

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, an old monument in

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the kutch

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kutch

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district in

gujarat

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state was replaced by

new

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advanced museum in 2017 by

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

.

In addition

, new

buildings

and

residency

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residences

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provides

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higher safety

lavels

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levels

labels

and protection against disasters like

flood

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floods

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or heat waves.

This

is because newly constructed structures are designed and monitored by using technologies.

This

leads to

higher

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the higher

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life expectancy of

building

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buildings

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and lowers the death

ration

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ratio

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, which is caused by

fall

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the fall

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of old

buildings

.

To conclude

,

however

, sophisticated houses and

buildings

provides

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protection against natural disasters,

old

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and old

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buildings

and

monuments

displays

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display

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heritage

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the heritage

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and culture of any nation.