You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.
Hello Jacky,
How are you? How is your studying process? Is your
university
good? Did you make friendship
with other group mates? Are they friendly? Is it hard to study new subjects at the Replace the word
friends
university
? When you have free time write me
about your study. It is very interesting for me Change preposition
to me
have
new information about Add the particle
to have
university
life.
I have good news for you. 2 weeks ago in our school the University
of Toronto
organized a competition Welcome to Toronto
University
. The aim of that project is introduce
Change the verb form
to introduce
introducing
university
life for pupils who interested
and planned study at that Add a missing verb
are interested
university
. I won in
Change preposition
apply
this
competition and will visit Add an article
the university
university
of Capitalize word
University
Toronto
next month for a week. And I need some information about Toronto
city.
Please write me
about life in Change preposition
to me
Toronto
. I want to visit cinema
and theatreCorrect article usage
the cinema
,
and go to the restaurants. What cinema and restaurants would you recommend for me? Have you ever been Remove the comma
apply
in
the National Change preposition
to
park
of Capitalize word
Park
Toronto
? I have read in
the internet Change preposition
on
this
park is very amazing and has a lot of unique plants from all of
the world. Please write Change preposition
over
me
about all of Change preposition
to me
things
about Add an article
the things
Toronto
city
.
Ok Capitalize word
City
by
Change preposition
apply
for
now, I must go to school. Mam and Add the comma(s)
, for
dad
are Capitalize word
Dad
whiting
Correct your spelling
waiting
me
in the car.
Ps. If you Change preposition
for me
dont
have time to write, text me my mobile number.
The best wishes
Your friend
Mike.Correct your spelling
don't
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity, particularly in the body of the letter.
suitable writing tone
Proofread your work to catch minor grammatical errors, such as 'whiting me' instead of 'waiting for me'.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a clear and friendly tone appropriate for a communication between friends.
complete response
You have provided a complete response to the prompt by including reasons for visiting, accommodation details, and a request for recommendations.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite