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The maps show changes in the city since 1995.

The maps show changes in the city since 1995.
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The maps illustrate the developments which have taken in the
city
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 from 1995 to now.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
city
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 has changed considerably and the six new features can be seen in the second map. The most noticeable is that the farmland in the northwest of the
city
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 was cleared in order to build new tennis and golf courses. All the trees in the Public Park which was the centre of the
city
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 were chopped and new Holiday homes and a car park were constructed.
Moreover
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, the Hotel and houses that were situated in the east of the
city
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 have been extended and the sports complex that was near the Hotel and fir market have been transformed into restaurants and new apartments, respectively. The coffee shop has been moved to the centre of the
city
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.
Furthermore
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, morning fish boats which were located near the sea were converted into new yachts.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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