The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK from 2000 to 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK from 2000 to 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line charts illustrate the
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of
years
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that immigrants intended to stay in the United Kingdom between 2000 and 2004. The given pie chart shows the proportion of 5 reasons for migration in 2008.
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, it can be seen that the majority of people tend to stay up to 2
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except in
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stages
while
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the
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of 2 to 4
year
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and
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number
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of 4 or more
years
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are essentially unchanged.
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one of the common reasons that they gave was work. First and foremost, The
number
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of 2-year
years
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immigrants increased remarkably from 150 to 250 over the period between 2000 and 2004 after it remained at
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level at 250. The figure of 2 to 4
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and the figure of 4 or more
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was fairly stable, hovering around 150 and 50 mark the entire time .
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, the proportion of work reason accounted for 38% of the total which is the highest percentage. Study and accompany/ join family registered at 32% and 16% respectively. Both other and no reason were at 7%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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