The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK from 2000 to 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK from 2000 to 2008 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The provided line charts illustrate the
number
of
years
that immigrants intended to stay in the United Kingdom between 2000 and 2004. The given pie chart shows the proportion of 5 reasons for migration in 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of people tend to stay up to 2
years
except in
early
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stages
while
the
number
of 2 to 4
year
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years
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and
number
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of 4 or more
years
are essentially unchanged.
Moreover
one of the common reasons that they gave was work. First and foremost, The
number
of 2-year
years
immigrants increased remarkably from 150 to 250 over the period between 2000 and 2004 after it remained at
same
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level at 250. The figure of 2 to 4
years
and the figure of 4 or more
years
was fairly stable, hovering around 150 and 50 mark the entire time .
On the other hand
, the proportion of work reason accounted for 38% of the total which is the highest percentage. Study and accompany/ join family registered at 32% and 16% respectively. Both other and no reason were at 7%
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