Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Major

companies

often sponsor

sports

events to advertise their goods. Many people think that

this

advertising has a bad impact on

sports

. I partially disagree

it

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apply

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that large

companies

use

sport

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sports

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compitition

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competition

to develop their

products

that

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apply

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this

has

positive

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a positive

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effect

to

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on

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sport

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sports

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also

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but also

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has some negative impact on

sports

. Large

companies

advertise their product in

sport

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sports

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tournaments that

has

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have

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benefits on

sport

. Big

companies

help

to

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apply

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sport

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sports

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to develop by prompting. If big

companies

sponsor

to

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apply

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sport

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sports

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,

this

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these sports

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sport

will develop.

Also

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Also,

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all expenses and

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the sportman's

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sportman's

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sportsman's

salary

pay

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are paid

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on time.

For example

, in European

countries

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countries,

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football

very

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is very

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developed nowadays because big

companies

advertise their

products

by using famous football

players

and football matches.

Players

use their

product

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products

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such

as drink

coco cola

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Coca-Cola

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, eat lays and use

ipone

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iPhone

and

sumsung

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Samsung

brends

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brands

. After

that

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that,

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this

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these

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goods are bought faster than others. Developed

companies

can give big

salary

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salaries

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for promoting and

this

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these sports

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sport

types will develop.

Nevertheless

, promotions have some negative effects on a match because they can distract the people or

players

from

keeping

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paying

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attention to the game they play or watch.

Moreover

, promoting

of

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apply

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unhealthy goods bad effect

to

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on

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everyone.

For example

,

players

all

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of all

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sport

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sports

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types drink energy drinks

such

as flash, adrenaline,

gorilla

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and gorilla

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.

This

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These

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drinks have

much

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many

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bad sides for human

healthy

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health

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. After advertising

of

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apply

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famous

sportsman

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sportsmen

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,

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many youngsters try to taste and drink them.

This

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This product

These products

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products

can negative impact on

sports

. In conclusion, on the

overall

trend , I partially disagree

it

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with it

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.

Altough

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Although

the many unnecessary

products

are promoted by

sports

events

it

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they

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also

have

much

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many

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benefits

the

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to the

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sport

financially.