The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK from 2000 to 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK from 2000 to 2008 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The present bar and line graph compare data about both reasons and the number of
people
who had different ranges of living
years
of immigrating to the United Kingdom between 2000 and 2008.
Overall
, most of the
people
preferred living in the UK for up to 2
years
;
furthermore
, a large group of
people
came to England for work.
According to
the line chart which shows the figures for time that
people
spent in the UK, the first time was less than 2
years
which started in 2001, the same as the upper 4
years
150;
then
increased moderately to 250 in 2004, but the trend had stabilized until 2008. The second one was
people
who wanted to live more than 4
years
had steadiness. The third was
people
who had lived from 2 to 4
years
.
In addition
,
this
line had risen slightly because at the beginning had 50. Later it grew to 100 in 2008. The pie diagram illustrates the initial reason migrated to the UK was working with 38%.
Secondly
, was study that was nearly the same as working after that join family was the third reason;
moreover
, no reason stated had absolutely the same as other by 7 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years with synonyms.
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