The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of males, females, and children who consumed five servings of fruit and vegetables daily in the UK from the years 2001 to 2008.
Overall
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, an interesting feature of
this
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bar graph is that the women surpassed both the men and the kids in eating these
foods
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,
while
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children were the least users.
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, the utilization of these
foods
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gradually increased in the given time period among all people.
To begin
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with, slightly less than a quarter of the women were including fruits and vegetables in their daily diet at the start of the 21st century.
This
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percentage gradually soared over time till reaching its peak in 2006 when over one-third of the female population (35%) was eating these raw
foods
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.
Following
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this
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, the number slightly decreased and levelled off for the following 2 years. Regarding the other two categories of men and children, a noticeable difference from the females can be observed
initially
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for the first 3 years, when only less than a fifth of both the males and kids were eating fruits and vegetables per day.
This
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percentage
also
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rose over time till 2006 when almost over a quarter (28%) of both these categories of the given data were eating these
foods
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on a daily basis.
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number stayed steady for a
while
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and decreased to 26% by 2008.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words foods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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