The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the number of males, females, and children who consumed five servings of fruit and vegetables daily in the UK from the years 2001 to 2008.
Overall
, an interesting feature of
this
bar graph is that the women surpassed both the men and the kids in eating these
foods
,
while
children were the least users.
However
, the utilization of these
foods
gradually increased in the given time period among all people.
To begin
with, slightly less than a quarter of the women were including fruits and vegetables in their daily diet at the start of the 21st century.
This
percentage gradually soared over time till reaching its peak in 2006 when over one-third of the female population (35%) was eating these raw
foods
.
Following
this
, the number slightly decreased and levelled off for the following 2 years. Regarding the other two categories of men and children, a noticeable difference from the females can be observed
initially
for the first 3 years, when only less than a fifth of both the males and kids were eating fruits and vegetables per day.
This
percentage
also
rose over time till 2006 when almost over a quarter (28%) of both these categories of the given data were eating these
foods
on a daily basis.
This
number stayed steady for a
while
and decreased to 26% by 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words foods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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