The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three catagories, from 1995 2002
This
bar chart depicts the total number
of minutes of three types
of calls in the UK from 1995 to 2002.
The local call category always had the highest total number
across the years, and it peaked in 1999. Meanwhile, the mobile call type
had the least
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lowest
number
even though it tended to increase significantly. In 1995, the local call types
had over 70 billion
which was significantly higher than the national and international and mobile call types
which had approximately 38 billion
and below 5 billion
minutes, respectively. However
, all call types
had risen gradually over the years except in 2000 when the local call type
number
dropped for the first time from 90 billion
to around 85 billion
.
Furthermore
, local calls continued dropped
over the years until 2002. Change the verb form
to drop
In contrast
, mobile call type
jumped significantly in 2000 to almost double of the previous year, hence
it became 24 billion
and it continued to increase to the peak at approximately 47 billion
in 2002. Meanwhile, the national and international call type
last
number
was slightly above 60 billion
and the local call type
number
decreased back to around the initial number
, a little above 70 billion
.
In conclusion, the number
of calls in three types
of calls fluctuated except for mobile calls which always increased every year.Submitted by kelly on
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