The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the working week should be shorter, it is allowing for

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to have a longer weekend. I completely agree with

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idea because shorter working hours can improve work-life balance, boost creativity, and provide opportunities for self-improvement. If citizens had been busy with shorter work

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they would have much less time for creating strengthened relationships and reducing stress.

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, parents could help their children with schoolwork or enjoy family events, creating a healthier and happier family environment. If people had worked with the short schedule they may have been more relaxed.

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it is effected that rested company are more focused and efficient. That's why They can create new innovative solutions for daily problems and work more effectively. If people had worked shorter weeks they would have had more free time for improvement. band can learn new skills, take courses, or pursue hobbies.

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, they could study a foreign language or improve their technical skills for jobs, which could benefit both their personal and professional lives. In conclusion, what

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shorter working week benefits corps which means more family time,

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productivity, and fostering self-improvement

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, it should be implemented.