The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The bar chart

compare

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the proportions of the individuals who lived in cities,

towns

and rural areas, categorized

according to

their origin as Australians or

the

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other outsiders in 1995 and 2010.

Overall

,

while

the majority of the people from each country lived in cities , the minority

was

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settled in the

towns

.

Moreover

, the population density in the

towns

and the rural areas

were

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reduced in 2010 when compared to 1995. When looking at the given data, it is conspicuous that nearly half of the original Australians lived in cities, which is approximately 10% lower than outside people's City density in 1995. In 2010 the

peoples'

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people'

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born in Australia,

in

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on

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the other hand,

have

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increased

the

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their city population by 10% than that of the 15 years before.

But

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, the same gap

within

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among

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the

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citizens from other countries

keep

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remains

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unchanged.

Similarly

, in 1995,

one fifth

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of pure

Australian's

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Australians

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have

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selected

towns

as their residency, which is

one

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tenth

per- cent

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per cent

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less than the proportion of

the

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rural individuals

of

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in

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the same year. Eventually,

this

difference

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among

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the Australians was raised gigantically accounted just below 20% of the

town

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town's

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popularity and roughly

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two times more than that of the rurals. In comparison, the percentage of all town and rural

sesettlers

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settlers

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witnessed a static value of about 15% in 2010 for all types of residents.