Living in the country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Being a temporary or a permanent resident of
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, where you have to communicate with others might get complicated, in terms of communication. I strongly agree with
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statement, because of
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language barrier and cultural misunderstandings, which
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on
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basis. So many people have suffered
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“language barrier”. Moving to another land
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means facing with a different tongue.
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couple of months are the toughest ones, when you must get used to
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accents, the way they pronounce the words, skipping some letters
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e. x.
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, you might
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get bullied at school or in other public places.
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, Potter moved to the new country
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parent work. He obviously got into a new school where he faced
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enormous hate. The reason for not being accepted was not knowing the tongue. Despite the language issue, there is another
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problem known as cultural faux pas. As you come to live in new
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, you will have misunderstandings, especially if you pray for another god. To add more, by following your culture, your
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would get
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wrong first impression about you.
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, after relocating you will invite your neighbors to your place to have a proper way to meet with them. Afterwards, you give them a meal, bringing a ship’s head
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, meaning “hospitality” in your tradition. Seeing the head of an animal would cause disgust among guests. That’s why you should be aware of
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of incidents.
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, my point of view remains consistent on
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topic. Language
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and cultural faux pas are
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in the head for every mover.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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