The charts below the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 219. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 219.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line charts illustrate the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the number of hours of household per week, per household in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, both vacuum cleaners and
refrigerators
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increased throughout
this
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period which became the most used appliances in 2019. On one hand, the time of housework decreased from 1920 to 2019.
It is clear that
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in 1920, washing machines with 40% were the most consuming electrical product in many houses,
while
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refrigerators
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were near zero in working by ownership. Between 1920 and 1980, all graph lines dramatically changed. It can be seen that the rate of using
refrigerators
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reached 100%, and the percentage of using vacuum cleaners jumped from 30% to 90%. But washing machines decreased slightly to around 65% except growing between 1920 and 1960.
Finally
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,
refrigerators
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kept their trend steady from 1980 to 2019. Vacuum cleaners peaked
to
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at
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100% in 2000 and stayed constant
to
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for
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the next year and washing
machine
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machines
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raised
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rose
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moderately
which
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apply
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placed
in
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at
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around 75%.
According to
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another table which describes the time of housework, it shows a drop from 50 hours per week to just near 10 hours per week from 1920 to 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerators with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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