The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
The table provides information concerning the
number
of individuals from five European countries located in each other’s nations during 2011.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that Britain and Germany were the two countries, which had the highest Linking Words
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of other nationalities. Use synonyms
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, Polish accounted for the highest Linking Words
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of subjects living outside their country, Use synonyms
while
Spanish citizens represented the lowest.
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what is shown, Germany had the highest Linking Words
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of foreign nationalities, at 1.198.00, the majority of them was Italian, at 556.000, and the minority was British, at 104.000. Use synonyms
In addition
, the UK served as the second region for having immigrants, at 1.037.000, the biggest Linking Words
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of them was Polish people, at 550.000, Use synonyms
while
the smallest was Spanish, at 71.000.
In terms of Italy and Poland, both of them had the lowest Linking Words
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of foreigners, at 196.000 and 6.000 respectively. In Italy, the Polish were calculated for the most outsiders, at 106.000, Use synonyms
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in Poland, the Linking Words
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of Germans represented the majority of foreigners, at 4.400. Use synonyms
Finally
, British people showed the highest Linking Words
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of foreigners living in Spain, at 391.000 compared to others.Use synonyms
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