The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the UK pupils rate themselves in answer to the question said to what extent they are financially organised.
Also
, the table shows the age group of the students
responded with very organised.
It is clear that
most of the students
consider themselves a fairly organised person in terms of financial discipline. Also
, a large percentage
of students
who claim they are very organised are older than others.
According to
the pie chart, a large percentage
of students
, 55% answered they are fairly organised, while
only 4% of them acknowledge they are not organised financially at all. The percentages for not very organised and very organised are close to each other, 20% and 21%, respectively.
Looking at the table, which shows the percentage
of students
who said they could manage their financial affairs precisely according to
their age, we can see that the percentage
of older students
is almost double that of younger pupils. The percentage
of students
that are between 23 and 25 years old is 26%.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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