The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many
kilometres
traveled
by each vehicle in the United States, Germany, Britain, France and Japan for twenty years from 1990 to 2010. Change the spelling
travelled
Overall
, it is clear that
the United States citizen traveled
at the highest Change the spelling
travelled
kilometres
compared to the other countries.
According to
the data, people in the United States traveled
more than the remaining four countries over the twenty-year Change the spelling
travelled
period
by around 1,800 kilometres
taken. Furthermore
, the British also
experienced a steady pattern after rising from about 1,300 kilometres
in 1990,
to approximately 1,400 Remove the comma
apply
kilometres
since
1993 until seventeen years later.
Change preposition
from
In addition
, the Germans occupied their cars by around 1,600 kilometres
beginning in 1990 to 2005, before experiencing a decline to 1,400 kilometres
in 2010. Likewise
, the French showed a similar pattern to Germany, starting at around 1,000 kilometres
at the outset of the period
until the next fifteen years, the length started to decrease after 2005 and fell down by 10% at the end
of the period
.
On the other hand
, Japan is the country which saw a downward trend from the beginning of the period
, although
there were slight increases in 2000 and 2005. After starting at around 700 kilometres
in early 1990, the number tended to decrease as they reached 400 kilometres
in 2010.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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