The chart below gives information about how families in one coutry spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The bar charts
provides
key information about how families spent Change the verb form
provide
there
weekly income in one country between 1968 to 2018. The units are measured in percentages. Replace the word
their
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that food is
the highest Verb problem
has
percent
Replace the word
percentage
over
all the categories. Change preposition
of
In addition
, 1968
there was some of the categories Change preposition
in 1968
are
high , Wrong verb form
were
whereas
in 2018, the same groups were less than 1968
.
Change preposition
in 1968
According to
what is shown, in 1968 housing was at 10% while
fuel and power was
nearly at 6% which is the difference between them is approximately 4%. Change the verb form
were
Clothing
and footwear, in 1968 it was at 10% Change preposition
In clothing
whereas
in
2018, it declined to 5% . Household Add the comma(s)
, in
it
remained stable Remove the pronoun
apply
about
8% in both years.
In terms of 1968 , personal goods and leisure are Change preposition
at about
a
slightly higher than transport but, Correct article usage
apply
on the other hand
in 2018, personal goods is
the lowest percentage .Transport is around 14% , and leisure is at nearly 22%Verb problem
had
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