The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A
galance
at the graph provided highlights the amounts of Correct your spelling
glance
balance
stores
that getting in and the Use synonyms
stores
getting out of the market in one nation during the given time period of 2011 to 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
stores
closed remains over the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
stores
opened. Noticeably, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
the
shops Correct article usage
apply
met
their closures has the historical highest record, Correct pronoun usage
that met
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
the
closures Correct article usage
apply
witness
the lowest one of all time.
To probe more deeply, in 2011, the initial Verb problem
was
number
of the opening Use synonyms
stores
Use synonyms
hitted
nearly 9000. Correct your spelling
hit
However
, it met a dramatic trend of decrease losing over 5000 shops in a single Linking Words
year
in 2012, and it took 2 years to climb back to share the same point with the Use synonyms
number
of doors closing in 2014. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of closures demonstrated a more Use synonyms
fleatu
trend Correct your spelling
frequent
during
2011 to 2014, at around Change preposition
from
closing
6000 to 7000 Verb problem
apply
stores
per Use synonyms
year
, which Use synonyms
then
met a Linking Words
substaintial
drop off, Correct your spelling
substantial
less
than 1000 shops closed in 2015.
What Change preposition
with less
have
to mentioned particularly, both of the trends were remained more stable after 2015, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
which
the Correct your spelling
with
number
of openings have kept 4000 new doors opened per Use synonyms
year
until 2018 Use synonyms
droped
Correct your spelling
dropping
at
3000, and the Change preposition
to
numbers
of closing doors were observedFix the agreement mistake
number
a
Change preposition
to a
stablization
of 5000 per Correct your spelling
stabilisation
year
from 2016 to 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores, number, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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