The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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The two maps illustrate various changes in a zone that manufacturing in a city called Norbiton has undergone since its operation from the present to the future.

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, as can be seen from the map, the factory witnessed a significant change in housing estates and some convenient services.

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the river now goes along to the town and is close to the farmland which is in the north of the map.

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, the river will be blocked by the roundabout in the north.

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, the residential areas will replace the production extents around the roundabout.

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, housing will

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be added at the top of the map next to the roundabout near the river. The roundabout at the present is quite basic but it will be renovated in the future, especially in the south.

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, the roundabout will connect with the playground and school, which are located in the southeast and the east respectively.

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, shops and a medical centre will be erected near the roundabout's centre.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
gentrification

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try cooporate more rather that competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion.