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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two data tables summarize the highest
as well as
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 the lowest points of
temperature
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 in two cities (
London
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 and
Sydney
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) on the 28th, 29th and 30th of December 2018.
Furthermore
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, it
also
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 includes sunrise and sunset hours. The
temperature
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 is given in Celcius.
Overall
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, the average
temperature
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 in
London
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 was cold,
whereas
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Sydney
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 experienced a warm climate for the given duration.
London
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 had short
days
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 in comparison to
Sydney
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.
London
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 was extremely cold during these
days
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, as temperatures dipped to a minimum of 3 to 5
degrees
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Celsius
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 at night. The highest
temperature
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 of 13
degrees
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Celsius
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 was recorded on 29th December,
while
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 on the remaining
days
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, it stood around 10
degrees
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Celsius
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.
Conversely
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, the temperatures in Syndey soared as they rose above 25
degrees
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Celsius
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 on all
days
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, with 30th December reaching a peak of 31
degrees
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Celsius
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. The evenings were comfortably warm with an average
temperature
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 of 18
degrees
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Celsius
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.
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, the sun rose at around 8:06 am every day in
London
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; meanwhile, sunset was noted at approximately 3:58 pm throughout the weekend. In stark contrast,
Sydney
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 witnessed more than 14 hours of sunlight on a daily basis. Here, the day began at 5:45 am mostly, and nightfall started around 8:07 pm.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, london, sydney, days, degrees, celsius with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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