In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Does advantage outweigh disadvantages?

Maternity is a well-known concept in which the preponderant role of all

mothers

is recognized as vital in the development of newborns.

Then

, some would argue that it must be mandatory to establish a specific

pospartum

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postpartum

period of

time

to allow

bodies

'

mothers

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their physiological homeostasis. I staunchly believe that all

mothers

have their own

time

, after giving birth, should have their own

time

not only for their health but

also

for the babies' growth. In

this

essay, I will explain my reasons in detail. To start with, physicians and scientists have proved that females'

bodies

have their own features and hormonal attributes that are in a strict balance in order to create and maintain a proper environment to nurture their

offsprings

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.

Thus

,

bodies

are exposed to a myriad of changes,

such

as an increasing weight, painful breasts, changing moods, variations in all systems mainly cardiovascular,

pulmonar

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pulmonary

, and the brain, etc.

Finally

, human

bodies

reach their basal condition after approximately 40 days after having a newborn.

Therefore

, most governments have proposed

mothers

should focus on their recovery for at least one month,

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some countries even more

time

.

For instance

, in Sweden, both parents have a temporary licence for approximately 6 months. The

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aforementioned

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have been set by governments and

researches

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in the public health field who have shown that the upsides of allowing parents to share with their children outweigh the stumbling blocks not only to

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their quality of life but

also

to

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stonger

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stronger

relationship with their

descedents

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decedents

descendants

.

For instance

, research done by sociologists and psychologists proved that newborns

that

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share most of their

time

with their

parent

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have less risk

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mental illnesses in the long run.

This

measure has dropped the incidence of postpartum depression by almost 30% in the United States.

Additionally

, the importance of

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must

to

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be taken into account to guarantee the nutrients that have been to supply in all children.

To sum up

,

mothers

'

bodies

suffer from multiple changes along their

pregnant

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conditions that are required to

guanrantee

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guarantee

adequate conditions in the environment where the fetus is growing up.

Therefore

, humankind

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to be aware that

mothers

have to be allowed to recover their basal biological functions in order to return to their workday activities.