The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The graph given illustrates data
on
between the average of temperatures and the average Change preposition
apply
on
three major cities of Change preposition
of
sunshine
per year.the graph relates monthly between Jan
and Dec to total the number hours
of Change preposition
of hours
sunshine
in three country
.
Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, the number of sunshine
on
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in
Jan
was less than the number of sunshine
on
Jul in New Change preposition
in
York
. According to
the graph, it is noticeable that there is a development.
It can be clearly seen that in London,New York
,Sydney. The numbers of sunshine
dropped on Jan
around 4 in New York
. On the other hand
, there was a rise between Jan
and Mar about 13 in London at hours
. During,recent years the numbers of sunshine
rose siginifacant
approximately 30 Correct your spelling
significant
hours
in New York
. Than
, there was a drop Replace the word
Then
siginfacant
on Dec about 5 Correct your spelling
significant
hours
. Also
, there was seam
between London and New Add an article
a seam
York
. Moreover
, there was fluctuation in Sydney one years
ago. Regarding to given data, it is remarkable that there is a leap.Change to a singular noun
year
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