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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the percentage of residents having
cars
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 in Britain over the 40-year period.
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, the upward trends were exhibited in having
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 sections and the opposite can be seen in no
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car
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 residents. In the first years, the highest rate belonged to
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car
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 families,
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, one
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 was expected to lead
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 of the period. In 1990, standing at approximately 51%, the highest proportion was witnessed in
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car
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 households, followed by one
car
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 and more than two
cars
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 with 37% and 11%, respectively.
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 figure for
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car
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 populations decreased dramatically to 30% in the first two decades
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 remained stable over the next 10 years.
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 rate was predicted to drop to nearly 15% in 2030 - just three-tenth the initial. Regarding owning
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 categories, the percentage of families having one
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 fluctuated and hit the highest peak at 55% in 2005
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 substantially decreased to nearly 42% in 2020.
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 rate was forecasted to slightly grow to more than 40% in 2030. After the slightly uneven over the first 15 years, the proportion of residents who had more than two
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 considerably rose, surpassing
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car
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household
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households
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 at 30% in 2020 and was expected to continue to increase to nearly 42% in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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