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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about the different age groups living in
Iceland
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 from 1990 to 2020. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, the percentage of
people
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 aged between 25-54 residing in
Iceland
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 rose dramatically throughout
this
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 period.
However
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, there was a steady decline in the
number
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 of
people
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 aged 15 to 24 in
Iceland
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. Despite
this
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, there were no significant changes in those aged between 55-64. The percentage of
people
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 aged 25-54 was around 30% in 1990, but
this
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number
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 rose gradually to around 35% in 2000 and 50% in 2020.
In contrast
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 aged between 15-24 declined sharply from 20% in 1990 to less than 10% in 2020.
Also
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, there was a considerable drop in the percentage of children living in
Iceland
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 from 25% in 1990 to approximately 18% in 2020. The proportion of individuals aged between 55-64 residing in
Iceland
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 was relatively constant despite few fluctuations. In 1990, the
number
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 was around 14% and 10% in 2020, but it was stable between 2000 and 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words iceland, people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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